Two cats are about to be punished....

[Guest]

Daystar waited as the two toms Firepelt and Oakclaw."I'm very disapointed in both of you,"he mewed,"Why did you not follow Grimclaw's plan?You could've gotten him and yourselves killed!You two should be ashamed of yourselves!"

[Guest]

sorry daystar

[Guest]

"I want to hear more than just 'Sorry Daystar,'!Why did you do it?!"

[Guest]

we wern't thanking okay i don't like grimclaw

[Guest]

"Why not?"asked Daystar,"what did he do to you to go try and get him AND yourselves killed?"

[Guest]

he acted like he was leade of the clan i'll think i'll organize a patrol like the deputy

[Guest]

"Windblow's in a coma!He's going to be deputy until Windblow wakes up!"yelled Daystar."Haven't you two heard?"

[Guest]

no i hatehim they both yelled

[Guest]

Do you have anyproof Grimclaw's a bad choice as leader?I don't see any!Now,for your punishment,Firepelt,for the rest of the moon you'll have to clean the warrior's and medicine den.You won't be able togo on any patrols!You too,Oakclaw!I will not tolerate selfishness!"

[Guest]

OOC dude you said firepelt would be deputy

[Guest]

OOC:I'm still deciding,to be truthfull...

[Loki]

OOC: Okay STOP!... All eyes on me for a second. Do you really think after a warrior yells at his leader, the leader would really pass the paws of the clan to him? After attacking a massive Male badger with no strategy? Thing is, Your not being realistic and here are some rules to remember:
1. A leader NEVER promises a rank
2. A leader is YOUR god and you shall obey your god
3.What the leader says goes
When you become a Leader your rank is moved to Moderater. Do you think an experianced Moderator is really going to pass down this massive role to someone who acts so recklessly.
1. Grimclaw is an obvious experienced RPger
I think that because people are experienced and can walk in so easily, you get angry, Because your not trying. I have been as nice as a Loki comes and this Loki has LOST it. I spent an hour on a post explaining how to do things for YOU. So if I don't see speech marks that look like this " which you receive when pressing SHIFT and 2 then I will run ragged. We don't care how fast you post, It woul be better a second longer with something that makes sense over something that doesn't. Stop attacking people who criticize! Grimclaw criticized my pic SO-WHAT I don't care I can't draw cats, not bothered, But he told me something I know But i DON'T go and attack him for it! NOW your going to ALL play nicely, Your going to ACCEPT things. The nicer you are, the better you Punctuation the closer you are to Authority you are NOT a five year old! An eight year old knows how to use the computer properly. NOW PLAY NICE!

[Guest]

OOC:Sorry!I'll edit it!Just don't hurt me!

[Loki]

OOC: Wasn't you flame nor' Grim It was aimed and Oakclaw but I was talking to EVERYONE!
OH good god this is what i am like when angry...

[Guest]

if yor like this now i'd wouldn't want to see you when mad as an adult.

[Guest]

I don't really know why, but the first time I RPed, I was actually very good at it (everyone said that). Oakclaw, here's a tip on role-playing: treat it as a story. If you think of a role-play thread as a kind of story, it will help. I can't explain how, but it worked for me.

PS: You know Oaky, you're just like Joe.

[Loki]

if yor like this now i'd wouldn't want to see you when mad as an adult.

if jamie was still on you could have asked him what I was like when he was poking a wall socket... He won't do it again, thats fer sure...

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