Thunder,A Rouge

[Guest]

Name: Thunder
Age: 20 moons
Gender: Tom
Alliance: Rouge
Rank:Rouge


Appearance: Black with amber eyes

Personality: Thunder is quiet and usually keeps to himself,he doesn't like other cats,he is very hostile to any cat that threatens him

History:When Thunder was born,his family including him were attacked.One of his brothers and two of his sisters died at that time.When he was 6 moons,foxes attacked and his father died.When he was 16 moons,his mother died of green-cough.He didn't know any other family members and he didn't have any friends,so he made a promise to live alone.

RP Example:Thunder wandered around.He scented another cat and looked up immediately.He looked around and saw a gray she-cat with black stripes and white paws.He padded up to her.
"Hello,my name is Thunder.What's your name?"Thunder meowed.
The she-cat looked at him."My name is Siel.Thunder,you seem very familiar.Have we met before?"Siel meowed.
Thunder looked at Siel."I don't think we have.If we have I surely don't remember meeting."He meowed.
"Your name,it's also familiar.Y-Your my brother!"Siel meowed.
"S-Siel?Siel!Mother said you were dead!"Thunder meowed."M-mother...She d-died....I miss her so much."He meowed.
Siel looked at him."M-mother?S-she's dead?But how?How?How did she die?I know father's dead,but mother shouldn't be dead.How?"She meowed.
"S-she d-died of green-cough."Thunder meowed.
"What?Thunder,how do you know she died of green-cough?"Siel meowed.
"I was there.It just isn't fair."Thunder meowed.

[Longstorm]

A suggestion for future role playing?

Separate the beginning of new sentences from the end of others.

Other than that, APPROVED.