Lightningpelt

[Guest]

b]Name:[/b] Lightningpelt

Age: 25 moons

Gender: She-cat

Alliance: DarkClan

Rank: Warrior

Appearance: Her main color is a very dark gold, but she has lighter gold spots and white stripes. Her fur is long, smooth and silky. Her eyes are a brilliant green.

Personality: Lightningpelt is overconfident and determined. She is not blood-thirsty, but enjoys fighting for her Clan. She is protective of her friends and family.

History: Lightningpelt had a hard life. She never knew her father, and her mother died in battle when she was a young apprentice. Lightningpelt vowed she would avenge her mother's death, and make her proud by being the best warrior she could.

RP Example: Lightningpelt looked around the warrior's den. She stretched her long legs and winced. She'd slept on a thorn. She began to jump around, trying to pull the prickles out. She let out a mew of frustration and impatience.

[Longstorm]

'Sup, I play the leader of Darkclan, Thornstar. I like the bio, but one thing needs to be changed; the suffix of your cat's name (the second part of it). LightningBOLT is a little straight-forward.

[Guest]

I've changed it to Lightningstrike

[Longstorm]

Again, it's a bit straight forward. The suffix should have more to do with her, or with her surroundings - I'd even allow Lighteningsky.

[Guest]

Lightningpelt?

[Longstorm]

Sure.

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