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Most memorable moments :)
I was wondering, what were you're favorite moments on the outcasts?
Pick a moment or several moments that you remember.
As an extra task I want to know a post you wished you could have improved or if you were the owner of another character involved what would you have wanted that other character to have said or done?
...Just curious
My most memorable moment:
Why? because this was Joy in her prime I don't know whats happened to her now she just seems... a miserable lump of cliche seen-it-all-before!
And she wasn't scared to snap at other cats... I just remembered ho far we all have come! Lets not count the mistakes in this post poor LS must have been so exasperated and fed up of me then.
(I can't find Lokistar's final battle D:)
Pick a moment or several moments that you remember.
As an extra task I want to know a post you wished you could have improved or if you were the owner of another character involved what would you have wanted that other character to have said or done?
...Just curious
My most memorable moment:
- Spoiler:
- Tigerflame stood and turned the nine month old tom was now in the kits face, "But many of you are she-cat, servants, a servant can't do much can they. If your all so mighty then why beat up she-cats, your all weak, The only thing that you can do is intimidate your opponent into thinking your strong. and that! Young servant; And that is how your opponent slips up! But we've grown to your ways and one day you'll regret setting foot upon the mainland all together!"
His whiskers where sprung and his teeth bared, Joy watched the tom carefully then to her surprise he carried on, "And if your so mighty... Then I guess they won't need weaklings like you!"
Joys ears pricked, He was going to kill Colorless!
She looked at Solarstorm but he was looking at his paws! He understood Tigerflame?
Joy hissed, "Get your ugly face away from her!"
Joy Rammed against the tom, Her whole body was shaking with tiredness now she was shaking with rage. Tigerflame gasped and turned on her his claws missing her fas but catching her ear, shredding a massive tear. Joy yowled in pain and the two bundled in raw fury.
Solarstorm jumped in and split the two. Tigerflame jumped away his side ripped his ears flat back.
Joy stood hackles raised perhaps looking slightly more beaton up, Her right ear bleading and flank oozing. her infected leg shook with pain. The two glared angrily.
Tigerflame spat and returned to the front of the warriors den.
"I don't wan another word out of any of you! Speak to each over! But keep your mouths shut!"
Colorless barely blinked as Tigerflame got in her face - of course, when he left, she slumped for a few seconds in relief. Then she called,
"A true Warrior would have killed me where I stood, Tigerflame!" She stopped and thought about her next words (OOC: Abyssclan: Twisting the minds of future generations today.). "You know what I heard? I heard that you only became a Warrior early because you wouldn't stop whining about your she-rat girly-friend!" Colorless made a habit of listening in on conversations, even if she didn't really know what they meant - but she wasn't giving that away.
Joy felt twisted pain ache inside her and she'd had enough.
"Be quite Colorless," She spat,"Its not in your place. A servant stays quite."
Joy limped to the back of the cave, had she been not so tired and not had to swim and fight and... She probably could have won, Though Tigerflame did not fully unsheaf his claws, and he had missed her face, Joy guessed the tom was still in love with her.
Why? because this was Joy in her prime I don't know whats happened to her now she just seems... a miserable lump of cliche seen-it-all-before!
And she wasn't scared to snap at other cats... I just remembered ho far we all have come! Lets not count the mistakes in this post poor LS must have been so exasperated and fed up of me then.
(I can't find Lokistar's final battle D:)
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Here's Lokistar's last battle.. Someone has to move most of Tawnyclan's old topics elsewhere.
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I'l sort them out later, I need to skim through a few topics and rename them :I
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I thought Colorless was LS's cat? https://outcastwarriors.rpg-board.net/t193-colorless-of-abbysclan
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She is.
Just posting the whole thing because colorless being there was part of what made it memorable.
Just posting the whole thing because colorless being there was part of what made it memorable.
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Hmm... My favorite posting moments... well:
That indeed was a few powerful posts, apart from Lokistar's death... upon which it still haunts my memories. T.T
Of coarse there were others who posted too, and I'm not saying the others didn't count... but I was happy with my posting on that topic.
also (Remember this? ):
and my last post or so that I thoroughly enjoyed was this one:
Also:
I love how that short topic went really... plus I lost where Ezziesong actually argues more with SP... *Shrugs* anyway, you all get the main idea... I love it when my kitties clash... that's pretty much it. and within the last spoiler I point out one post I wished I could have worked more on.
There's ALOT of typing here... and quite a numerous amount of topics I enjoyed... some I couldn't find and besides... all of this copying and pasting is proving to be a pain. :/
So... there we have it. My favourite moments in the roleplay that involve my kitties... and I'm loving how the nine lives topic is working out too! I cant wait to soon change my username to Ezziestar!
- Spoiler:
- ezziesong wrote:Ezziesong lashed out at Stormclaw; however the calico tom sidestepped then scored Ezziesong's muzzle. Ezziesobg was too distracted with Oak's battle that she didn't pay any attention to her own. Stormclaw scored Ezziesong's keft flank and bit down hard on her tail, causing her to screech out in pain. Stone leaped at Stormclaw, But Stornclaw was too fast and too strong for the young tom. "Is this what Tawnyclan is training now? Weak Rogues!"ezziesong wrote:Stone hissed at the tom, "I once looked up to you as a friend."
"Friends are for the weak and mousebrained!" Stormclaw snarled back before leaping at Stone landing an expertly precise hit over Stone's forehead. The blow sent Stone stumbling before he leaped at the tom again. Ezziesong jumped at Stormclaw screeching out, "You rogue!" Both Ezziesong and Stormclaw were thrown into a charred log. Embers flew up where the twodisappeared Stone yowled out, "Ezziesong! NO!"
But there was no reply, only the occasional hiss and screech.ezziesong wrote:Stone leaped into the place where Ezziesong and Stone were thrown into. There a silence as Stone crashed right into Stormclaw. Stone spun around and lashed out with his paws at the Tawnyclan traitor, who was stunned after he was knocked from behind by the other tom. Stormclaw snarled at Stone, ducking before he jabbed Stone with a claw; Stone couldn't believe how fast Stormclaw was. Ezziesong bared her teeth as she leaped forwards, knocking Stormclaw away with a great blow of her paw. Stormclaw was thrown backwards, before he regained his footing, Ezziesong began lashing out with all of her claws. raking the tom that was in front of her.
The smoke stung her eyes, but Ezziesong kept going, slowly driving her once trusted clan mate backwards. One swipe scored Stormclaw's nose, That one's for Lokistar! She sliced where Lokistar's wounds had inflicted, And that one's for betraying Tawnyclan!
Stormclaw snarled as he had enough, he managed to get Ezziesong's throat, but not deep enough to kill, the two hesitated, Stormclaw lowered his head, keeping his green eyes fixed on her icy blue eyes, "My turn." Stormclaw hissed deeply, before lashing out in blind fury.
Stormclaw screeched as he rushed at the she- cat, his memory flashing back to when he was an apprentice, when Falsecall taught him the best moves to use and how to use them effectively. The familiar hiss in his ear when he murdered his first cat, he jumped to one side when Ezziesong swiped, then he spun around unexpectanly, and managed to kick Ezziesong with his hind legs. Stone appeared frozen to the spot, his eyes wide with fear as he watched helpless.
Stormclaw snarled at Ezziesong, "Your too weak and slow! A kit could do better then you." He taunted as he landed a hit on Ezziesong's chin, her naturally white pelt now scarlet and tattered with wounds. Ezziesong's icy blue eyes glowed blue fire when he said this, she snarled, "Why are you doing this?"
Stormclaw bowled her over and pinned her to the ground, "I want you to suffer! It should've been me Ezziesong, you should've picked me!" tears entered the tom's eyes, "I want you to know what it's like to lose everything you ever loved!"
Ezziesong whimpered, "You will never understand what it's like to lose your best friend, mate and home! You ruined everything."
Ezziesong kicked up, knocking the well muscled blood thirsty tom away from her, enough for her to get to her paws.
Stormclaw shook his head, "No," He paused to look at Stone, who was still terrified, he had never seen as much blood as what was before him, and was actually quite frightened, "You haven't lost everything yet..."
Ezziesong knew what Stormclaw was about to do, she screeched as she lashed out with all the energy she had, she spun around to Stone, "Stone! Get out of here! If you don't leave now Stormclaw's going to kill you!"
The tom grasped Ezziesong by the throat, Stone hesitated, Ezziesong's choking was too much, he growled, "Let her go!" He leaped at Stormclaw, "No!" Ezziesong coughed as Stormclaw released her.
((Yeah, big post, *Yay for Ezzie!* I said I'd make it up to you guys.))Gast wrote:With a loud yowl Oak charged into Stormclaw's side knocking him off of Ezziesong. "I'm tired of hurting everyone that used to be my friends!" Oak said." If I can change I know you can change Stormclaw!" Think of all your old friends and all of the fun times you had!" Oak now had tears in his eyes I know you can change."ezziesong wrote:Stormclaw spat back, "What friends? Even if I did change, would you think I would be accepted back? I've changed," He paused, then finished by hissing, "Prehaps you should change to!"
Ezziesong pleaded, "Stormclaw! Please for Starclan's sake don't tell me you believe that!"
Stormclaw retorted, "Starclan!" His spat out the words as if he was going to be forced crowfood and he only had a bit before he felt sick. "Starclan abandoned us!"
He then turned to Oak, "I may not be accepted to Tawnyclan," He hissed threateningly, "But I know for certain where my loyalties lie... do you?"Guest wrote:Sunshift was bewildered.So Oak listened to my reason.....He stood beside Oak and whispered,"I'm taking this fool out.Distract him,say something about loyalty or somehting else really mushy."He backed away onto the tree until his back was touching, and then began something he had been working on for a certain amount of time:he climbed backwards.Gast wrote:"My loyalties lie here!" he said "and yours should too!"ezziesong wrote:Stormclaw snorted, "Liar, traitor and spy!" he leaped towards the other tom. Ezziesong closed her eyes, she could see Lokistar's lifeless body, fury filled her from ears to tail tip. She snapped open her eyes, her icy blue eyes burned a blue flame as she screeched, "You rogue!" She leaped at Stormclaw, her tears streaming down her face as she got a direct hit in Stormclaw's flank.
Stone joined in and the two forced the well muscled tom backwards. Stormclaw felt his heart thud in his chest, heavy with sorrow and pain. The only she-cat he had ever loved, was now driving him backwards. Fear lapped at his heart like a mother for her kit when he realized the flames were closing in on him.
His mind shreiked at him to flee, but his heart wouldn't allow it, his muscles finally began to feel sore and ached, his paws were frozen.
He whispered, "Will I ever be good enough for you?"
Stormclaw's question startled Ezziesong, and Stone waited for her instructions. Anger flared in her heart, "You think you can be my mate now? You killed my best friend and a great leader, you abandoned me and the clan and you want me to be your mate? You will never be in this clan again, you will never be my mate and you have made me lose more then you could ever imagine!"
Stormclaw growled, "I thought you care about me!"
"You made me lose more then you would know, when will you stop?" her eyes were pleading and still she had tears flowing over her scarred cheeks.
"I will NEVER stop until you realize how much I am to you!" With that, Stormclaw raced off, he paused on the boulder he came from, looked back towards Ezziesong, whom turned away, tears flowing freely, Stone hesitated, looked at Ezziesong, then at Stormclaw.
he raced after Stormclaw, snarling, "Don't come back!"
Stormclaw disappeared behind a curtin of flame.Guest wrote:"OH NO YOU DON'T!" screamed Sunshift as he leapt after him.Straight into the path of a few Mud cats.But he didn't care.He raced past them and kept running.He didn't grow tired.But Stormclaw kept running.Then fatigue claimed his fiery spirit,and he collapsed.He was now at the Tawnyclan-Darkclan border."Have fun in Darkclan,"he panted,struggling to catch his breath.In the distance, he saw a few Mud cats running after him."Ah foxdung,"he cursed.He got onto his legs and started running towards Darkclan.His lungs begged for air, but he knew his life depended on his fittness.Ezziesong,he thought, I hope you bring in a search patrol after me....ezziesong wrote:ezziesong stared after the toms, the smoke got to her, and she collapsed, unconscious in the burned land, embers flying around her and everything blurred. Oh Lokistar, if only you could see what traitors there are... If only you were here still to lead us into glory... I'm not ready...
Stone returned, the heat from the flames almost exhausted him, he spotted Ezziesong unconscious, "Ezziesong!" he screeched, rcing over despite his aching muscles. he grasped her scruff. Hold on! I'll get you out of here!
Ezziesong mumled weakly, "Just go... leave me..." She broke off as she fell into unconsciousness.Gast wrote:"EZZIESONG!" Oak yowled. Stone,help me get her." he said.ezziesong wrote:Stone rushed over to help, he gently grasped Ezziesong‘s neck scruff and tried tugging her towards where the fire was at its weakest. Please hold on! How can there be structure in this clan if your dead too! Tears streamed down Stone‘s face in frustration, I never got to tell you how i feel about you... I know your not as young as I am but... I love you...
That indeed was a few powerful posts, apart from Lokistar's death... upon which it still haunts my memories. T.T
Of coarse there were others who posted too, and I'm not saying the others didn't count... but I was happy with my posting on that topic.
also (Remember this? ):
- Spoiler:
- ezziesong wrote:Stormclaw had decided to go for a look around what appeared as a naked forest. the trees had no leaves, and memories of the flames were fresh in his mind. Stormclaw closed his eyes, he couldn't bare the thought of how the forest was burned down. He went to Mudbloodclan hoping for a better life, was the burning down of the forest enough? To see the look on that Tawny mousebrained scum! ((Is that an alright word?))
Suddenly there was a shreik, "Traitor!"
Stormclaw saw Stone, Stone's pelt almost was completely scarlet from blood and most of his pelt made him look grey from smoke and ash.
Stormclaw's tail tip was twitching in annoyance, he decided to ignore the tom and walk off. "Don't turn away from me!" Stone coughed out, his voice hoarse from the smoke that he had fallen unconscious in.
Stormclaw paused to call over his shoulder, "Why? It's not like I care anyway."
Stone looked disappointed, "I was hoping to run you off, but it looks like all traitors got the better of you. Fighting you wont be too hard."
Stormclaw stopped and watched as Stone lipmed towards him, claws unsheathed and ready for battle. Stormclaw sighed, "What is the use? Your just as broken as when I dragged you there."
"Broken? Dragged?" Stone scoffed, Stormclaw shrugged, then went to leave again.
A weight knocked him down, He's faster then I thought.
Claws dug into his back, But still as beebrained as he first time we fought.
Stormclaw couldn't take it anymore, he flipped over and managed to knock Stone off, and half crush him in the process, then he got to his paws, flipped around and had Stone pinned, his claws digging into the Tawnyclanner's chest. Stone hissed, "Kill me, go on."
Stormclaw then realised what was going on, "Your petty tricks wont have any effect on me!" He hissed.
Stone said nothing, just closed his eyes and waited. Stormclaw hissed into his ear, "I wont kill you this time, but if you stay here and bring more Tawnyclanners, or any clanners, then I'll hunt you down!"
the hiss sent chills through Stone's mind, suddenly, the claws had withdrawn, the weight gone. Stone opened his eyes, half expecting the older tom to still be there. But Stormclaw had gone, leaving behind nothing more then tension in the air.
and my last post or so that I thoroughly enjoyed was this one:
- Spoiler:
- ezziesong wrote:It would be strange for the cats whom weren't with the border patrol that Stormclaw and Ezziesong were on when he was an apprentice. The two sat next to each other without bickering, hissing or retorting. They just sat there, talking and enjoying the warmth. Stone was much better nowas he was fully recovered.
Ezziesong beckoned him over with her tail. Stone, whom hadn't met Stormclaw before, padded over to join them, "Stormclaw, this is Stone, Stone, meet Stormclaw." Stormclaw dipped his head curtly, it was awkward for him since Stone wasn't his clanmate. Ezziesong purred, "Stone, I had to ask you something but we were a bit busy."
Stone twitched his ear as he looked at her.
Ezziesong continued, "I wanted to test out how well you could fight."
Stone snorted, "Fight? I gave you that scar there, of coarse I fight well."
Ezziesong felt a little hot under her fur, Stormclaw was getting a little irritated at the tom's behaviour and he growled, "He's a rogue! He wouldn't want to fight even if he had talent!"
Ezziesong then meowed, "Yes, but we need to see if he knows how to fight."
Stone got to his paws as he hissed at Stormclaw, "I could fight you if you want, I'll show you what I can and can't do!"
Stormclaw got to his paws, "Alright then... your on."
Ezziesong snapped, "Not here! We have to go to the training hollow first!"
The two toms ignored her as Stone made the first move. He lashed out with a paw, Ezziesong sighed in relief that it was sheathed.
Stormclaw ducked and then swerved to get Stone's ear. But Stone was fast, he leaped back and batted Stormclaw's neck with his paw, before slipping down and pummling his belly with his hind legs.
Stormclaw quickly pinned him down, but Stone once again was one step ahead. He rolled to one side, causing Stormclaw to lose his grip and fall over him. Stone then headbutted him to one side. Stone leaped onto his back, clinging on easily with his toes, since Stormclaw has long fur it was easy to hold on, "And you said rogues fight badly! Your worse then a kittypet!"
Stormclaw snarled at him, "At least I don't THINK like a kittypet!" He leaped in the air, causing Stone to let go, he twisted in the air before he was about to give Stone a hit against the cheek, but Ezziesong got inbetween the toms, a sharp pain filled her side as she landed on the ground heavily.
the two toms stopped hissing at each other as they saw what happened. Stormclaw's claws weren't sheathed that time, and Stormclaw deeply cut Ezziesong's flank. Stone's eyes widened in fear, We were just mucking around! Why did he unsheathe his claws? Ezziesong gasped in pain as the scarlet fluid oozed out of the deep wound.
"I told you both to stop," Ezziesong rasped, "But neither of you did! What's wrong with you two?"
Stormclaw hung his head, Stone was speechless.
Ezziesong almost collapsed but Stormclaw rushed and supported her. "Comeon... lets go to Glaciercloud's den." he murmured before shooting a glare at Stone as they left.
((Poor Stone... It wasn't his fault, he was mucking around XP, but why DID Stormclaw unsheathe his claws? Oooo. Naughty warrior.))
Also:
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- (Me) Ezziesong lead the patrol towards the border, Stormpaw followed without hesitation. Ezziesong was about to ask Stormpaw what he could smell but the scent of mouse. Instantly Ezziesong crouched, she strained her ears to listen, she picked up a small rustling sound as a mouse scrabbled near a bush.
Ezziesong was close enough to pounce, but before she did, a flash of calico fur brushed past. Stormpaw beat Ezziesong to the mouse, he killed it instantly with a bite to the neck.
"That was mine!" Ezziesong hissed.
"You were too slow." Stormpaw replied through clenched teeth as he still had the mouse gripped tightly.
(Garnetheart) "Stormpaw, be nice to your mentor." Garnetheart stepped out of a bush. "And keep it down. Youre scaring away the prey."
(Loki) There was a thundering of paw steps as Nightail and Solarstorm padded out, from the thicket. "Webfooted dewclan ducks!"
Spat Nightail as they came into the clearing. If there was prey it most likely had been scared away. Solarstorm on sight of the hunting patrol, purred. "There is a Dewclan cat in OUR territory, and Lokistar punished US for protecting OUR territory can you believe that?"
(Me) Ezziesong meowed, "Why would she do that?"
Stormpaw hissed at Garnetheart, "She should stop treating me like a kit, then I'll be nice."
Ezziesong's tail twitched as she tried her best to not hit Stormpaw over the head.
(GH) "Yeah why would she?" Garnetheart asked, then turned to glare at Stormpaw. "You better watch what you meow."
(Me... and I wish I could have improved this post) Stormpaw snorted, he didn't say anything else.
(Loki) Solarstorm hissed angrily, "Watch your lips apprentice, you know nothing yet- Your lucky your mentor does not chew you up!"
(Me) Stormpaw's tail twitched angrily, Ezziesong then meowed, "Whe was the Dewclan intruder?"
(Loki) Solarstorm's tail flicked angrily, "Grimclaw and Jayleaf- how VERY annoying they were, very rude seen as it was OUR border."
(Me) Ezziesong's tail lashed, "Very... They can't just come in." She shook her paw, "But we can't do anything..." Ezziesong then spoke to the hunting patrol, "We should head back now..."
Stormpaw groaned, "But I only caught a mouse! Can't I stay longer?"
Ezziesong whipped around and faced him, "No! I said we are going now, can't you just follow orders for once in your life without refusing?"
Stormpaw hissed, "I don't see why I should, don't I have a say in my life?"
Ezziesong's fur bristled, "We ared going whether you like it or not! You can carry the mouse, but we aren't staying here."
The two stood there, fixed glares at each other before Ezziesong turned and headed back to camp. Stormpaw reluctantly followed.
(Loki) Solarstorm exchanged a look with Nightail and she shrugged. The two followed them back.
I love how that short topic went really... plus I lost where Ezziesong actually argues more with SP... *Shrugs* anyway, you all get the main idea... I love it when my kitties clash... that's pretty much it. and within the last spoiler I point out one post I wished I could have worked more on.
There's ALOT of typing here... and quite a numerous amount of topics I enjoyed... some I couldn't find and besides... all of this copying and pasting is proving to be a pain. :/
So... there we have it. My favourite moments in the roleplay that involve my kitties... and I'm loving how the nine lives topic is working out too! I cant wait to soon change my username to Ezziestar!
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<3 Awww Ezzie.
Some things we forget but then we read them and its beautiful. I'm listening to Radioactive by Imagine dragons and I'm like:
Some things we forget but then we read them and its beautiful. I'm listening to Radioactive by Imagine dragons and I'm like:
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Loki! Have you listened to It's Time by the same artist? I LURV DAT ONE!
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Daww... This is too happy and touching for me! IT'S SO... DAWWWWWWW XD
I can't wait to RP with you again Eezie! After all of the things I've been doing, it would be nice to~!
I can't wait to RP with you again Eezie! After all of the things I've been doing, it would be nice to~!
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:'D Yaay! I can't wait... but I've got to go back to Ezziesong. She's almost finished. (But not quite. ;P )
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OOOO - I found a favorite moment!
Deep In the Tunnels, Loveless Follows a Voice
I LOVE the beginning of this topic - here's why:
VILETONGUE. He was a jerk in life, but in death he's allowed an explanation. He talks about forbidden love and regretting descisions. He is roleplayed so epicly by Meany that I can't even describe how much fun it is to read Viletongue describing his own backstory.
Here's some posts!
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"You sure like talking to yourself, Legless." The raspy voice came from a bit further down the tunnel Loveless had come from.
A shadow emerged from it, translucent even in its' darkness. When it got close enough to Loveless, it became clear it was the shape of a cat, and the face was familiar.
Viletongue. "You might be crazy or something. Or dead. Like me." He seemed very okay with his current state of being.
Loveless twisted his neck around to see the shadowy figure - "Viletongue? How did - " Loveless stood, "How did you find me?" His ears drooped. "Did we lose?"
Viletongue rolled his yellow eyes. "D'ya think I'd be all smoky if you tick-eating Servants hadn't?" He didn't wait for a glimmer of recognition to grace the eyes of the Servant. "I'm dead, eejit. Your little plan worked out fine." Again, he didn't seem to mind.
Loveless gasped, remembering how Viletongue had just showed up out of the dark to join the patrol. "...Uh.. How... was it?" Bad question, Loveless knew. REAL bad. He felt stupid.
Viletongue let out a long, ripping laugh. "How was it? Hahah - cold, shocking, heart-stopping - but I'm better, thanks." The thank-you was almost genuine. "It's actually kinda nice to not have to worry so much about everything from enemy Clans to loners to bad blood to Servants with funny legs and dung like that." The tom sighed. "Of course - I gotta stay down here if I want it to stay that way." That irritated him and it showed on his face and his lashing tail.
Stupid Above - all those damn rules.
Loveless was relieved that the dead Warrior probably wasn't there to kill him. But now he was a bit confused. "W-why do you have to stay down here? Of all places? Why don't you join Scourge?" Yes, Loveless knew the whole story about Scourge, as told by Shadowstar to Sinface to him. "Why don't you join your old Clanmates in the stars instead of being in this musty old place?"
Viletongue sighed again and padded up to sit next to Loveless. "I guess dying makes me a little more open - guess this little story won't hurt my reputation these days. Sit down, and I might tell you my reason."
Loveless glared at the dead Warrior but sat anyways - he was curious.
"Well?" Yep - revolutions were just so freeing.
Viletongue's ears flicked. "Cocky." He swept his tail so it was resting over his paws, a strange pose for one who was such a formidable Warrior in life. "I like it down here. We only have legends about this place - what better place to spend the rest of your remembered days, where all secrets and answers may be found?" The look of excitement in the black tom's eyes was like when a kit looked at the world for the very first time.
"But... it's more than that." A look of sadness flickered across his face - then stayed. "When I was younger than you, a Choosing called 'Vile', I was friends with a she-cat apprentice from Tawnyclan." Viletongue didn't want to pause long enough to give Loveless enough time to say something.
"Her name was Sandypaw - she had an attitude and pelt to match her name," the was a tinge of wistfulness in the Warrior's voice. "I met her at a Gathering not too long before I was given my Warrior name. She was the only apprentice there brave - or stupid - enough to stand up to a Warrior from our Clan. Don't remember his name," scorn in his voice. "I guess it was obvious to Sandypaw that I admired her for what she did. We insulted each other a few times before the Gathering was over. I thought I'd never have to see her again, but I was wrong. Even then I helped with patrolling, and apparently patrolling is a big part of training in Forest Clans. We kept seeing each other across the borders, and while the others fought, there was nothing said between us." Viletongue had a far-off look, gone back in the days of his training.
"I... don't know how it happened, but suddenly we were both sneaking out to meet up. Sometimes I swam the river to see her, other times she ran across the Battlefields to meet me. I told her everything about us - and she told everything about life in Tawnyclan. It was all so foreign to us, how the other went about daily life, how differently we were raised."
Viletongue sighed sadly. "Then I told her about these tunnels. I'd never been inside, but I knew where an entrance was... We were young and curious... We both went inside... Only I came out."
The tom looked and felt more broken than he had ever in the presence others, but it was nothing new to him.
"Hence my name. It was my words that brought Sandypaw here, and it was my words that killed her."
The tom suddenly laughed. "And now I'm here, spilling my tick-filled guts to you. I really am dead."
Loveless's eyes looked upon the Warrior with sadness. "I'm sorry, Viletongue."
Viletongue batted at Loveless - his paw went right through his head, of course. "I don't want your pity. She doesn't want it either," he looked to an empty space next to him.
Loveless couldn't see it, but the lovely Tawnyclanner was sitting next to him, her sandy pelt glowing like she was standing in sunlight.
Earlier, Sandypaw had forgiven him, saying it hadn't been his fault - and she also made fun of him for getting so OLD.
"So, that's my little story, Prince. Haha, yeah. I know who you and your brother are, sneaky badgers. Good luck - and take care of the cats who are living down here, would you? It's creepy having four kits and two she-cats here with us ghosts." The black tom's image dispersed quite suddenly, like wind blowing away smoke, only his raspy laugh telling that he had been there.
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It's brilliant! I love it to bits and pieces! I've never felt any form of pity for Viletongue until this topic, and now I'm glad that he gets to be with Sandypaw. Who knows how he could have turned out if she had lived?
Ah, I wonder.
Anyways, that's one of my favorite RPing moments.
Deep In the Tunnels, Loveless Follows a Voice
I LOVE the beginning of this topic - here's why:
VILETONGUE. He was a jerk in life, but in death he's allowed an explanation. He talks about forbidden love and regretting descisions. He is roleplayed so epicly by Meany that I can't even describe how much fun it is to read Viletongue describing his own backstory.
Here's some posts!
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"You sure like talking to yourself, Legless." The raspy voice came from a bit further down the tunnel Loveless had come from.
A shadow emerged from it, translucent even in its' darkness. When it got close enough to Loveless, it became clear it was the shape of a cat, and the face was familiar.
Viletongue. "You might be crazy or something. Or dead. Like me." He seemed very okay with his current state of being.
Loveless twisted his neck around to see the shadowy figure - "Viletongue? How did - " Loveless stood, "How did you find me?" His ears drooped. "Did we lose?"
Viletongue rolled his yellow eyes. "D'ya think I'd be all smoky if you tick-eating Servants hadn't?" He didn't wait for a glimmer of recognition to grace the eyes of the Servant. "I'm dead, eejit. Your little plan worked out fine." Again, he didn't seem to mind.
Loveless gasped, remembering how Viletongue had just showed up out of the dark to join the patrol. "...Uh.. How... was it?" Bad question, Loveless knew. REAL bad. He felt stupid.
Viletongue let out a long, ripping laugh. "How was it? Hahah - cold, shocking, heart-stopping - but I'm better, thanks." The thank-you was almost genuine. "It's actually kinda nice to not have to worry so much about everything from enemy Clans to loners to bad blood to Servants with funny legs and dung like that." The tom sighed. "Of course - I gotta stay down here if I want it to stay that way." That irritated him and it showed on his face and his lashing tail.
Stupid Above - all those damn rules.
Loveless was relieved that the dead Warrior probably wasn't there to kill him. But now he was a bit confused. "W-why do you have to stay down here? Of all places? Why don't you join Scourge?" Yes, Loveless knew the whole story about Scourge, as told by Shadowstar to Sinface to him. "Why don't you join your old Clanmates in the stars instead of being in this musty old place?"
Viletongue sighed again and padded up to sit next to Loveless. "I guess dying makes me a little more open - guess this little story won't hurt my reputation these days. Sit down, and I might tell you my reason."
Loveless glared at the dead Warrior but sat anyways - he was curious.
"Well?" Yep - revolutions were just so freeing.
Viletongue's ears flicked. "Cocky." He swept his tail so it was resting over his paws, a strange pose for one who was such a formidable Warrior in life. "I like it down here. We only have legends about this place - what better place to spend the rest of your remembered days, where all secrets and answers may be found?" The look of excitement in the black tom's eyes was like when a kit looked at the world for the very first time.
"But... it's more than that." A look of sadness flickered across his face - then stayed. "When I was younger than you, a Choosing called 'Vile', I was friends with a she-cat apprentice from Tawnyclan." Viletongue didn't want to pause long enough to give Loveless enough time to say something.
"Her name was Sandypaw - she had an attitude and pelt to match her name," the was a tinge of wistfulness in the Warrior's voice. "I met her at a Gathering not too long before I was given my Warrior name. She was the only apprentice there brave - or stupid - enough to stand up to a Warrior from our Clan. Don't remember his name," scorn in his voice. "I guess it was obvious to Sandypaw that I admired her for what she did. We insulted each other a few times before the Gathering was over. I thought I'd never have to see her again, but I was wrong. Even then I helped with patrolling, and apparently patrolling is a big part of training in Forest Clans. We kept seeing each other across the borders, and while the others fought, there was nothing said between us." Viletongue had a far-off look, gone back in the days of his training.
"I... don't know how it happened, but suddenly we were both sneaking out to meet up. Sometimes I swam the river to see her, other times she ran across the Battlefields to meet me. I told her everything about us - and she told everything about life in Tawnyclan. It was all so foreign to us, how the other went about daily life, how differently we were raised."
Viletongue sighed sadly. "Then I told her about these tunnels. I'd never been inside, but I knew where an entrance was... We were young and curious... We both went inside... Only I came out."
The tom looked and felt more broken than he had ever in the presence others, but it was nothing new to him.
"Hence my name. It was my words that brought Sandypaw here, and it was my words that killed her."
The tom suddenly laughed. "And now I'm here, spilling my tick-filled guts to you. I really am dead."
Loveless's eyes looked upon the Warrior with sadness. "I'm sorry, Viletongue."
Viletongue batted at Loveless - his paw went right through his head, of course. "I don't want your pity. She doesn't want it either," he looked to an empty space next to him.
Loveless couldn't see it, but the lovely Tawnyclanner was sitting next to him, her sandy pelt glowing like she was standing in sunlight.
Earlier, Sandypaw had forgiven him, saying it hadn't been his fault - and she also made fun of him for getting so OLD.
"So, that's my little story, Prince. Haha, yeah. I know who you and your brother are, sneaky badgers. Good luck - and take care of the cats who are living down here, would you? It's creepy having four kits and two she-cats here with us ghosts." The black tom's image dispersed quite suddenly, like wind blowing away smoke, only his raspy laugh telling that he had been there.
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It's brilliant! I love it to bits and pieces! I've never felt any form of pity for Viletongue until this topic, and now I'm glad that he gets to be with Sandypaw. Who knows how he could have turned out if she had lived?
Ah, I wonder.
Anyways, that's one of my favorite RPing moments.
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It reminds me of Joy when she was small and stupid and met up with Tigerpaw, who only really saw her as a rebound.. meh, I is all sad now.
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