Is this correct?

[Guest]

Name:Pinestar

Age: 36 moons

Rank: Warrior

Alliance:Flurryclan(My own clan)

Appearance:Pinestar his thick built tom-cat with rippling muscles under his light brown tabby fur.He has dark green eyes like moss and splotches of white on his chest and tail.

Personality:Pinestar is a kind and gentle Tom who prefers to be with others more than by himself.He also spends time thinking alot, making him a bit of a strategist.

History:Pinestar, formely known as pine, came from a family of abusive twolegs.He lived in a nice house, and his twolegs seemed nice, but behind closed doors, his twolegs were beating him.Then one day, he got the strength to slash back.His twolegs through him out into a mean forest where he felt at home.He encountered many problems, but eventually started his own clan of warriors called Flurryclan.

[Longstorm]

We're not accepting Pseudo-Clan bios...if you want to form a Pseudo-Clan in-game, fine, but it takes some doing.

[NKninja]

Yes, that's true. That means you should look at the main 4 clans or the three pseudo-clans if you want to make a character. I presume you would go great with Dewclan. That and i'm getting a bit irritated that everyone's going to Tawnyclan, even though it is technically the Thunderclan of this group.

[Longstorm]

Really? I more thought of them as the WindClan of the group. Long-legged and wily, and all that.

[NKninja]

Yea, but you also have to think about where they live as well. And their clan personality, it's actually pretty similar.

[Longstorm]

I was just going off of appearance and attitude, and quite frankly, history. WindClan - constantly chased out of their territory. Not often they ask for help. So on, so forth...
But, whatevers!

Hopefully, lovely Ivorypelt will respond.

[NKninja]

Touche. I'll take your point on that.

But as usual, SLIDING OUT OF THE CONVERSATION! (Don't want to loose points.. Don't I?)

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