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Cascadingmoon of Tawnyclan

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Post by Guest Wed Apr 11, 2012 11:21 pm

Name: Cascadingmoon

Clan: Tawnyclan

Age: 11 moons

Rank: Warrior

Apperance: Cascadingmoon is a chocolate calico cat with a white muzzle and white paws.

Personality: Cascadingmoon is friendly and reliable she is very loyal to her clan and will dye to protect it from any intruders.

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Post by Guest Wed Apr 11, 2012 11:43 pm

Not a mod, but you need an rp example with your bio. And as far as I know, Moon is a Medicine cat surname, so maybe a different surname would be better. Just my recommendation.

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Post by Longstorm Thu Apr 12, 2012 2:37 am

More than that, how do you get a name like 'Cascading'?

EDIT: I mean, I know there's some falls not too far from TawnyClan's camp, but cascading sounds like a name a cruel parent would give their kit, since it basically means falling.
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Join date : 2010-12-04
Age : 29
Location : Vvardenfell.

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Post by Guest Thu Apr 12, 2012 4:09 am

Also, 11 moons is rather young for a warrior, even a new one.

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Post by Longstorm Thu Apr 12, 2012 4:31 am

Not necessarily; Firestar was about 11 moons when he became a warrior.
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Post by Guest Thu Apr 12, 2012 4:33 am

Really? I picked up 12. But it is still somewhat young.

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