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Post by Guest Sun Nov 20, 2011 11:27 pm

Name: twig(will change later to ghost or holly)
Age: 5 moons
Gender: she cat
Alliance: rouges/kittypets

Rank: rouge/kittypet kit

Appearance: black all over with some dark brown stripes and with dark green eyes.is very lean and skinny
Personality: at first she is proud and kind but she goes into a change and she becomes curl mean and evil

History: born in the city, mom died whe n she was 4 moons, dad blams her for her moms death, dad is abousive

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Post by Longstorm Sun Nov 20, 2011 11:32 pm

I love your energy, but please finish your first bio and RP those cats a bit first.

Your sentences, spelling, and punctuation could use a bit of work... Please speak to Meany or anyone else who offers to help after your first bio has been perfected.
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Post by Longstorm Mon Nov 21, 2011 8:55 pm

*HEADESK*

bounce bounce

Ima send this kid a warning if things don't change - just to get his/her attention.
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